i think he just wasn't paying enough attention to her.  i hope the right words said sincerely will help heal the rift.  but i'm an optimist :).

heyy lol thanks !!!! wanna read one of my poems  ok!!

once upon a time there were two people who fell for each other.....but couldn’t be together

The risk was to big to take…..they would never make it

She would give anything

take the risk or nothing at all, not being ready for the fall

He was scared , scared of it all

In societies eyes it was all wrong

No one could know, they had to pretend they weren’t even friends

Hoping to be together in the end

To only be able to be with your best friend .

So he left, left her alone , to go about his life

He must of forgot to tell her this

Because she never stopped waiting, he had her broken but still hoping

Then one night he called her ……out of the blue

And all the feelings came back, he was once again everything she ever lacked

She thought everything was good, but she must have misunderstood

It wasn’t long in till the calls stopped again ….. Back to pretend again

This time she kept trying

Then one night it worked, her mother was gone

And he was to come over

She got all pretty, all pretty for him

She danced and spin not being able to withstand

the wait for him to pull in

She waited but was ok, knowing he’d come to be able to make her day

A hour went by and she started wondering why

Two, three then four hours

Now she lied on the bathroom floor starring at the ceiling

She couldn’t take this no more

She dried her tears and softly whispered goodbye

Knowing she would still be waiting inside…..

hmmm so lets play this by ear....

Staring out into space, again
The landscape hasnt changed at all
Since the last time you checked
(24 seconds always seem like 24 hours 
everytime you realize you cant go back in time)
You dont know what youre waiting for
Retracing footsteps is impossible in winter storms
When the streets are covered in ice
(slipping and sliding into the past
demanding a response from your reflection is hopeless)

Great poems jess_anintha17 and bluberries4liv.  Thanks for posting them.  Lynda, please give it a try. 

If you want in on the competition remember to post them on Booksie.

Phil

im still thinkin about it... but will i get credit for it?  kuz i dont want some guy bein like "i wrote this just for you" if i wrote it.

Peace,

---Stephen

ahh alright cool, ill look in my old notebook and see if i can find anything decent.

Peace,

---Stephen